A picnic in the park with my classmates in the park <em>('a' should be right, but for some reason we usually say 'picnic in the park')</em>

It was early in summer, so the weather was pretty good. Some of my classmates and I did purchase some shopping in the morning, and we bought a lot of barbecued pork, and vegetables, some fruits and snacks. It took about an hour and a half and an hour to arrive get to the park. After On arriving, some of us played games, while I went with a few others my friends and I went to hang out in the park. Actually, it's a wild park, some hills around a big lake, it's pretty beautiful! We climbed the hills and watched people fishing around the lake. About 4 hours later, we went back to the place where we would have the barbecue area.

Some of my classmates did washing, some cut the pork and peeled the vegetables down, while some stuck(???) stacked? put out(?)  the food. After all these everything was readied, we started to the barbecue. We were all got quite good at it after several attempts times of practice, even though we were not to begin with at the beginning. The most unforgettable moment was that we shared the food with others. It was really funny, we played games and sang until 8.p.m. It was a day full of laughter throughout the day. And I still keep the photos of  that we all the classmates posing together at 5pm, cause we were in grade 5.

Even though it occurred a long time ago, but still those the moments are still alive in my memory mind till now. It was really an unforgettable occasion memory.

A picnic with my classmates in a park

It was early in summer, so the weather was pretty good. Some of my classmates and I did the grocery shopping in the morning, we bought a lot of barbecued pork and vegetables, some fruits and snacks. It took about half and an hour to arrive to the park. After arriving, some of us played games, while my friends and I went to hang out in the park. Actually, it's a wild park, some hills around a big lake, it's pretty beautiful! We climbed the hills and watched people fishing around the lake. About 4 hours later, we went back to the place where we would have the barbecue.

Some of my classmates did washing, some cut the pork and vegetables down, while some stuck the food. After all these things were ready, we started to barbecue. We were all good at it after several times of practice, even if we were not at the beginning. The most unforgettable moment was that we shared the food with others. It was really funny, we played games and sang until 8.p.m. It was full of laugh throughout the day. And I still keep the photo that we all classmates posed a 5, cause we were in grade 5.

Even it occurred a long time ago, but the moments are still alive in my mind till now. It was really an unforgettable memory.