A disastrous journey! It happened when I was twenty three. I was to visit to my friends who lived in Malaga. I spent a good weekend. I was working in an academy as a Maths teacher so I thought to come

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A disastrous journey! It happened when I was twenty three. I was to visit to my friends who lived in Malaga. I spent a good weekend. I was working in an academy as a Maths teacher so I thought to come back to Ronda on sunday afternoon but I changed it and I decided to return on Monday because my friends asked me to return the next day. On Monday I got up very early and I took a taxi to the bus station, there I got on the bus which was at the bus terminal to Ronda. The landscape seemed very strange for me, I had never seen it but there were a lot of road works at that time and several roads were cut for that reason I didn't think this bus didn't go to Ronda. The driver didn`t ask for us the tiket along the journey and neither he did not check if the number of passengers corresponded to the tikets sold. When we arrived in Alhaurin every people got off the bus, it was when I ask the driver when we were going to arrive in Ronda and you can deduce what happened in that moment. I can to buy another tiket to Malaga. When I got to Malaga I phoned to the academy and I had to tell what had happened and after I went to the bus terminal to put a complain because the driver had parked the bus in the worng terminal and he had not to check the passengers' tikets. Please, can anybody correct me?. Thank you.

Feb 7, 2014 10:26 PM

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A disastrous journey!

It happened when I was twenty three. I went to visit my friends who lived in Malaga. It was a good weekend. I was working in an academy as a Math teacher, so I thought about coming back to Ronda on Sunday afternoon. I decided to return on Monday, because my friends asked me to return the next day.
On Monday I got up very early and I took a taxi to the bus station. There I got on the bus, which was at the bus terminal to Ronda.
The landscape seemed very strange to me; I had never seen it, but there were a lot of construction projects going on and several roads were closed. Because of the work being done, I didn't think this bus would go to Ronda.
The driver didn`t ask for us the ticket, and he did not check if the number of passengers corresponded to the number of tickets sold.
When we arrived in Alhaurin, everyone got off the bus. That was when I asked the driver when we were going to arrive in Ronda, and you can guess what happened next.

I had to buy another ticket to Malaga. When I got to Malaga, I phoned the academy to tell them what had happened. Later, I went to the bus terminal to put in a complaint because the driver had parked the bus in the wrong terminal and he had not to checked the passengers' tickets.

Please, can anyboy correct me?. Thank you.

February 7, 2014

A disastrous journey!

It happened when I was 23. I went to visit to my friends who lived in Malaga. I had a good weekend. I was working in an academy as a Maths teacher, so I thought I would come back to Ronda on Sunday afternoon, but I changed my mind and I decided to return on Monday because my friends asked me to stay another day.
On Monday I got up very early and I took a taxi to the bus station, where I got on the bus which was at the bus terminal for Ronda.
The landscape seemed very strange to me; I had never seen it before, but there were a lot of road works at that time and several roads were cut. For that reason I didn't realise this bus wasn't going to Ronda.
The driver didn`t ask to see out tickets during the journey and neither he did not check if the number of passengers corresponded to the tickets sold.
When we arrived in Alhaurin everyone got off the bus. This was the moment when I asked the driver when we were going to arrive in Ronda and you can deduce what happened next.

I had to buy another a ticket back to Malaga. When I got to Malaga I phoned to the academy and I had to tell them what had happened. Then, and after I went to the bus terminal to put in a complaint, because the driver had parked the bus in the worng terminal and he had not to checked the passengers' tickets.

Please, can anybody correct me? Thank you.