Insist on writing essay. Introduce myself. Introduce myself. I'm ycl(YinChengLai), I was graduated from Hebei University of Engineering. My major is project management. After gratuation I came to JCC

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Insist on writing essay. Introduce myself. Introduce myself. I'm ycl(YinChengLai), I was graduated from Hebei University of Engineering. My major is project management. After gratuation I came to JCC work, as a cost management. Then I was assigned to the project department of Xinjiang. I work there for three years. Earlier this years I returned to Jilin. I didn't get enough rest last night, so I want to sleep earlyer today. I have listen to Nancy, write simple essays but maybe there is still some mistakes in this essay. Ha ha, I'm going to bed now.

Nov 20, 2010 3:42 PM

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I insist on writing essays. Introducing myself.

Self Introduction

I'm YinChengLai. I <strike>was</strike> graduated from Hebei University of Engineering. I majored in project management. After gratuation I went to JCC to work, as a cost management analyst . Then I was assigned to the project department of Xinjiang. I worked there for three years. Earlier this year<strike>s</strike> I returned to Jilin.
I didn't get enough rest last night, so I want to go to sleep earlier tonight. I have listened to Nancy's advice and I will write simpler essays, but I'm sure there are still some mistakes in this essay. Ha ha, I'm going to bed now.

Very nice job! I'm not sure you were an "analyst" but I guessed. ^^

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November 21, 2010

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