Writing Task 1 Correct it Please You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter

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Writing Task 1 Correct it Please You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter: • introduce yourself • explain what experience and special skills you have • explain why you are interested in the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses Dear Sir, I am writing in response of you advertisement in the newspaper for the job in Museum, I am of 28, studying in the Peshawar University doing MS Computer Science, our summer vacations are about to start from next month therefore I decided to start work to make my holidays worthy. I had an experience of working in restaurant where my job is to take orders and serve food, there I learned how to communicate, how to deal with foreigners, I am also able to speak and write English at good level. Moreover, our hostel is just near to your Museum and we visited there lot of time due to which I have a knowledge of many terminologies pertaining to Museum. Actually, I applying for this because it’s near to our living place, I already have knowledge of this Museum and most interesting thing is that I love to visit historical places, Last year I went to Taxila, Monjo Darro (Historical place in Pakistan) and I have a very keen interest in history. I hope you will give me a chance to serve in Museum. Look forward to hear from you in the near future. Yours faithfully Awais

Jul 9, 2014 10:58 AM

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Writing Task 1 Correct it Please

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job
Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses

Dear Sir,
I am writing in response of to your you newspaper advert advertisement in the for the job in the Museum. I am of 28, and studying MS Computer Science at the Peshawar University doing. Our summer vacations are is about to start from next month, therefore I decided to start work to make my holidays more worthwhile worthy.
I had an work experience of working in a restaurant, where my job was is to take orders and serve food. Whilst there, I learned how to communicate and how to deal with foreigners. Additionaly, I am also able to speak and write English at a good level. Moreover, our my hostel is just near to your Museum and I have visited there lot of times, therefore, due to which I have a knowledge of many terminologies pertaining to Museums.
Actually, I am applying for this because it’s near to where I live our living place, I already have knowledge of this Museum and the most interesting thing about me is that I love to visit historical places. Last year I went to Taxila, Monjo Darro (a historical place in Pakistan) and I have a very keen interest in history.
I hope you will give me a chance to serve work in the Museum.

Look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Yours faithfully
Awais

July 9, 2014

Writing Task 1 Correct it Please

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays.
You decide to apply for the job. Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain what experience and special skills you have
• explain why you are interested in the job
Write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses

Dear Sir,
I am writing in response to your advertisement in the newspaper for the job at the City Museum. I am 28 years old, studying for a MS in Computer Science at Peshawar University. Our summer vacation will start next month, therefore I decided to start working to make my holidays worthy.
I have experience working in a restaurant where my job was to take orders and serve food. There I learned how to communicate and deal with foreigners. I am also able to speak and write English at good level. Moreover, I visited the museum often and have learned many terminologies pertaining to the museum.
I applying for this because it’s near to our living place. I am already knowledgable about the museum and I have a very keen interest in history. I also love to visit historical places. Last year I went to Taxila, Monjo Darro (a historical place in Pakistan)
I hope you will give me a chance to serve in Museum.

I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.

Sincerely,
Awais