Lovers

I want to share how to find a soulmate. In the past, I was always to be attracted by to some men who are were very soft, tly,chary kind, and considerate. But when we fell in love, I found that's it wasn't not true love. I just wanted to find some a guy s who will take care of me. For a long time I have thought so I used a long time to think about this problem, and I really want to know what is the important between the lovers. I have also read some books about sexual relations (OR about sex, OR about relationships).than I found the answer to why I always need a softly gentle man to love me. It's because I didn't get enough attention and love from my parents when I was a child. In fact, this is my own problem, and I should solve it myself. It's wrong to hope to find a man who can will care for me and who can give me enough patience and love, because no body can do this for the my whole life. I also found a that it's a little boring to fall in love with such a man. So I try to use find some ways to make let my heart to grow up. and Then I have found I don't love the a man who is just softly gentle anymore. Now I think the most important thing between the lovers is something else.

1) When you make a list seperated by commas, you must end the last item with an "and" or and "or/nor"

2) You are speaking in past tense most of the time, so you need to watch your verbs when you do that

3) Don't forget spaces after periods and commas.

4) Typically we don't say "about sexual relations" - it sounds like medical speak. We would say about sex, or about relationships