Could you please correct?

There are a few reasons why I would like to make a placement request from outside of the school catchment area. First of all, Anna has been at Inches Nursery for the last 2 years and she has made really good friendships with other children from this school. Second, Anna is shy and it is not easy for her to find herself in new, challenging situations. Finally, we are planning  to buy a house in the Inches area in the near future, so it would be good if she could continue her learning progress at Inches Primary School.

Thank you for your help :)

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