Elena
Tony, Amy and Talia Talia is a researcher at Newsline, a tv news program She has been working for three years since she left the colleage. She works hard and she aleays too tired to go out whith her friends. She never has a bad sense of humor, she is retless because her schedule is very hard. She works all day. She goes to journalism class because she eants to be a great reporter. She doesn't balance her job with her life, this is the cause of she is a irritable person. I think Talia is a workaholic. Amy is an assistant at Newsline, it is a first job. She is a cheerful girl. She is in a great mood and energetic. She goes to journalism class with Talia. She wants to learn a lot of to has promotion opporunites in her job. She is a smug girl ans she wants to fall in love very soon. Tony is a director at Newline. She is oldest than Talia and Any. He is the boss. He always is there when some news is going to break. He thinks to overcome his productivity, in spite of he is very cheerful and laid back enough in his job. This is Talia, Amy and Tony. They are coworkers. Amy always wants to go to parties whit Talia but Talia never wants to go. She never accepts invitations because she always works. Tony has a big project to Talia. He knows that Talia is a good employee and she needs holidays. Tony said to her that when she had a break she went to Tony's office to speak to her. She is packing her suitcase now. She is going to go to Paris with her friend Amy.
Mar 11, 2015 10:48 AM
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Tony, Amy and Talia

Talia is a researcher at Newsline, a tv news program / programme (1) She has been working for three years since she left college (2) the colleage. She works hard and she is always  aleays too tired to go out whith with her friends.
She never has doesn't have a bad sense of humor   but she is retless restless because her schedule is very hard. She works all day  and she  goes to journalism class because she wants eants to be a great reporter.
She doesn't balance her job with her life, this is the cause of her irritability  she is a irritable person. I think Talia is a workaholic.
Amy is an assistant at Newsline, it is a her first job. She is a cheerful girl. She is in a great mood and energetic. She goes to journalism class with Talia.
She wants to learn a lot of to has have promotion opportunities opporunites in her job. She is a smug (3) girl ans and she wants to fall in love very soon.
Tony is a director at Newline. She is oldest older than Talia and Any. He is the boss. He is always is there when some news is going to break. He knows that he is a work alcolholic thinks to overcome his productivity, but in spite of it he is very cheerful and laid back enough in his job.
This is Talia, Amy and Tony. They are coworkers. Amy always wants to go to parties whit with Talia but Talia never wants to go. She never accepts invitations because she always works.
Tony has a big project to plans for Talia. He knows that Talia is a good employee and she needs holidays.
Tony said to her that when she had a break she went to Tony's office to speak to him  her.
She is packing her suitcase now. She is going to go to Paris with her friend Amy.

(1) British English spelling.

(2) Definite article not needed here.

(3) 'Smug' is a rather negative adjective, perhaps 'She is very proud of herself' would sound much better.

I hope that I have interpeted your meaning correctly.

March 11, 2015
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