Happy Persian New Year The New Year ceremony is the most lovable occasion in Persian's culture. This ancient ceremony is held in Iran, Azerbaijan, Tajikistan and the other parts of parted Persian Empi

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Happy Persian New Year The New Year ceremony is the most lovable occasion in Persian's culture. This ancient ceremony is held in Iran, Azerbaijan, Tajikistan and the other parts of parted Persian Empire. Persian New Year start for moderate day of year; the day that the length of day and night is equal; the first day of spring when nature starting to renewing. The first day of New Year ceremony is called Nowruze and there are a lot of traditional set of actions that are performed about this day. People have whole cleaning; everywhere and everything should be neat and tidy for coming year. People buy new curtains and furniture for their home and put on the best clothes. They have a lot of fun, partying, traveling and in a word, they try to make the most of this long vacation in any way possible. They have some special activity associated with this festival: - Visiting relatives, start from seniors - Raising some seeds to grow green to bring prosperity to their life - Giving crisp, unfolded newly issued bank notes to children - Cooking some special dishes - Decorating the house as much beautiful as possible The last paragraph gets from: (Crack IELTS in a Flash, M. S. Bagheri, S.Nikpoor) The Picture: http://www.pix2fun.net/wp-content/uploads

Mar 17, 2015 6:01 PM

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Happy Persian New Year

The New Year ceremony is the most lovable occasion in Persian's culture. This ancient ceremony is held in Iran, Azerbaijan, Tajikistan and the other parts of the former? Persian Empire. Persian New Year starts when the length of a day and night is equal; on the first day of spring when nature is starting to renew.

The first day of the New Year ceremony is called Nowruze and there are lots of traditional activties that are performed on this day.

People spend a lot of time cleaning; everywhere and everything should be neat and tidy for the coming year. People buy new curtains and furniture for their home and put on their best clothes. They have a lot of fun, partying, traveling and in a word, they try to make the most of this long vacation in any way possible. They have some special activities associated with this festival:

- Visiting relatives, starting with older-relatives
- Raising some seeds to grow green to bring prosperity to their life
- Giving crisp, unfolded newly issued bank notes to children
- Cooking some special dishes
- Decorating the house as much beautiful as possible

The last paragraph gets from:
(Crack IELTS in a Flash, M. S. Bagheri, S.Nikpoor)

The Picture:
http://www.pix2fun.net/wp-content/uploads

March 17, 2015

Happy Persian New Year

The New Year ceremony is the most lovable occasion in Persian's culture. This ancient ceremony is held in Iran, Azerbaijan, Tajikistan and the other parts of parted Persian Empire. Persian New Year start for moderate day of year begins on the vernal equinox; the day that in which the length of the day and night is are equal; the first day of spring when nature starting to renewing.

The first day of the New Year ceremony is called Nowruze, and there are a day that is filled with various a lot of traditions set of actions that are performed about this day.

People have whole cleaning clean everything from top to bottom; everywhere and everything should be neat and tidy for the coming year. People buy new curtains and furniture for their home and put on the best clothes. They have a lot of fun, partying, traveling, and, in a word, they try to make the most of this long vacation in any every way possible. They have Some special activities are associated with this festival:
- Visiting relatives, start from with seniors
- Raising some seeds to grow green to bring prosperity to their life lives
- Giving crisp, unfolded newly issued bank notes to children
- Cooking some special dishes
- Decorating the house as much to make it as beautiful as possible

The last paragraph gets from:
(Crack IELTS in a Flash, M. S. Bagheri, S.Nikpoor)

The Picture:
http://www.pix2fun.net/wp-content/uploads

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March 17, 2015

Happy Persian New Year

The New Year ceremony is the most BELOVED occasion in Persian's culture. This ancient ceremony is held in Iran, Azerbaijan, Tajikistan and the other parts of FORMER Persian Empire. Persian New Year BEGINS ON VERNAL(autumnal) EQUINOX; the day that the length of THE day and night is equal (twenty-first of March); the first day of spring when nature starting to renew.

The first day of THE New Year celebration is called Nowruze. Nuwruze is the great national celebration of Iran, A DAY THAT IS FILLED WITH VARIOUS TRADITIONS.

People CLEAN ALL THINGS FROM TOP TO BOTTOM ; everywhere and everything should be neat and tidy for THE coming year. People buy new curtains and furniture for their home and put on the best clothes. They have a lot of fun, partying, traveling, and in a word, they try to make the most of this long vacation in EVERY way possible. Some special activities are associated with this festival:

- Visiting relatives, start from seniors

- Raising some seeds to grow green to bring prosperity to their LIVES

- Giving crisp, unfolded newly issued bank notes to children

- Cooking some special dishes

- Decorating the house TO MAKE IT AS beautiful as possible

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March 19, 2015