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Short Message 10 Hi Sarah, Thank you so much for the delightful dinner party last night. It was great to finally catch up. The food was incredible — I still remember the cheese cake. Let’s set another dinner date at my house. Does the 15th work for you? -- The task was to write a short message of between 35 and 45 words in length. There are also three content points that the message must include which I do not publish because of copyright concerns. Thank you in advance :)

May 21, 2015 3:15 PM

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Short Message 10

Hi Sarah,

Thank you so much for the delightful dinner party last night. It was great to finally catch up. The food was incredible — I still remember the cheese cake. Let’s set another dinner date at my house. Does the 15th

Suitable /ok

work for you?

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The task was to write a short message of between 35 and 45 words in length. There are also three content points that the message must include which I do not publish because of copyright concerns.

Thank you in advance :)

May 21, 2015

Neil is right. Is 15th OK for you.

May 22, 2015

"cheesecake" is usually written as one word. /// Someone suggested using the words "suitable" or "ok" in your last sentence. Those words are fine, but you would have to begin the sentence with "Is" instead of "Does": "Is the 15th suitable/ok with you?" Moreover, with "suitable," the preposition "for" would be somewhat better than "with": "Is the 15th suitable for you?" /// Your sentence, "Does the 15th work for you?" is perfectly correct.

May 21, 2015