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Samantha
A mail I need to write an email for a customer. "Dear mr. XXX, thank you for the interest shown in our product; Please find attached the requested quote, excluding shipping cost. Because does not exist a built-in drier machine, in addiction than required I have added at the quote the prices of a built-in washing + drier machine, and of a free standing drier machine. For further information don’t hesitate to contact us. Best regards" Is this understandable?
Jun 5, 2015 4:19 PM
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A mail

I need to write an email to a customer.


"Dear Mr. XXX,
Thank you for the interest shown in our product. Please find attached the requested quote which excludes the cost of shipping.

A built-in dryer does not exist, so in addition to your request, I have added quotes for a  built-in washer and drier and for a free standing drier.

Please do not hesitate to contact us if you require any further information.

Yours sincerely



Is this understandable?

 

Hello Samantha,

I have made a few corrections to style and words which make it sound a little more professional. I hope this helps.

June 5, 2015
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A mail

I need to write an email for (to) a customer.


"Dear mr. XXX,
thank you for the interest shown in our product;

Please find attached the requested quote, excluding shipping cost.

Because does not exist (Since) a built-in drier machine is not available, in addiction (addition) than (to the) required quote, I have also added at the quote the prices of a built-in washing + drier machine, and of a free standing drier machine (<em> I have included quotations for a built-in washing+drier machine and for a free standing drier</em>).

For further information don’t hesitate to contact us.

Best regards"



Is this understandable?

June 5, 2015
More simple. Dear Rodrigo, thank you for the interest shown in our product; Please find attached the requested quote, excluding shipping costs. Because does not exist a built-in drier machine, I have added to the quote the prices of a built-in washing + drier machine and of a free-standing drier machine as well. For further information, please, don’t hesitate to contact us. Best regards
June 5, 2015
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