Maggie
You have just moved into a new home and planning to hold a party. You have just moved into a new home and planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor. Dear Neighbor, I just bought this house in this month. I'd like to become your new neighbor. I am working as a product manager in an Internet company. We have met each other once when I moved into this house. I plan to have a housewarming party at this weekend. I'll invite my colleagues, friends and parents to my new home. I will prepare for BBQ, red wines, all kinds of fruits, fry chips and cakes. In addition I will also do some Chinese dishes. My friends like listening to the music, so we will play some music. It could be made a big noise. I frankly invite you to join our party. We could have a fun time and I will introduce you to all of my friends. It must be very interesting to communicate with each other. The party will begin on Sunday morning. Please feel free to come. If you decide not to come for any reason, please tell me, and I want to be sure that the noise will not disturb you. Looking forward to see you! Yours sincerely, Maggie
Jun 8, 2015 2:57 AM
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You have just moved into a new home and you are planning to hold a party.

You have just moved into a new home and you are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.

Dear Neighbor,

I just bought this house in this month. I'd like to become your new neighbor. I am working as a product manager in an Internet company. We have met each other once when I moved into this house.

I plan to have a housewarming party at this weekend. I'll invite my colleagues, friends and parents to my new home. I will prepare for BBQ, red wines, all kinds of fruits, fry chips and cakes. In addition I will also do some Chinese dishes. My friends like listening to the music, so we will play some music. It could be made a big noise be noisy. 

I frankly sincerely invite you to join our party. We could have a fun time and I will introduce you to all of my friends. It must will be very interesting to communicate with each other. The party will begin on Sunday morning. Please feel free to come. If you decide not to come for any reason, please tell me, and I want to be sure that the noise will not disturb you.

Looking forward to see you!

Yours sincerely,

Maggie

 

That's a very respectful note! :)

June 8, 2015
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