Kate
If I were a bird If I were a bird,I would fly in the sky for a long while.because I dream about flying in the sky.I would fly up high and view the cityI live in and it must be awesome.I would fly above a valcano.I would want to fly to the mountains or lakes to see the beautiful senery.And maybe Iwould fly to the end of the world. If I were a bird,I would live in a tree.When I was a kid,I always wonderd what the birds do in a tree.Now,I am a bird,all the questions would have answers. If I were a bird,I would fly to my favorite star's vocal recital and I can watch it near the stage with free! To be a bird can do many things,many crazy and interesting things.But birds have lots of natural enemy,and a bird should eat the disgusting bugs!And hunters will hit you,little boys will use the slingshot to ingure you! So, I like to be a person much than a bird.What about you?
Jun 8, 2015 1:44 PM
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If I Were a Bird

If I were a bird, I would fly in the sky for long, because I dream about flying in the sky. I would fly up high and view the city I live in; it must be awesome. I would fly above a valcano. I would like to fly to the mountains or lakes to see the beautiful scenery, and maybe I would fly to the end of the world.
If I were a bird, I would live on a tree. As_a kid, I always wonder what_birds do on treesbut as a bird, all those questions would have answers.
If I were a bird, I would fly to my favorite star's vocal recital and I could watch him near the stage for free! 

Birds can do many things, many crazy and interesting things, but birds have lots of natural enemies, and a bird should eat_disgusting bugs! And hunters will shoot you, little boys will use_slingshots to hurt you!
So, I prefer to be a person than a bird. What about you? :)

June 8, 2015
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