New mayor in Cadiz!
<em>Hi everyone, </em>
<em>today is an special day for a lot of people in my city, Cadiz.</em>
today is a special day
<em>I'm going to explain you why are we happy.</em>
<em>The past 24th of May were the local elections in all the cities around my country.
</em>On the 24th of May, there were local elections in all the cities in my country*.
*around the country or in my country
<em>This is something ordinary (we vote for these local elections each 4 years)</em>
This is not unusual: we hold local elections every 4 years
<em>but our mayor has been controlling and handling the town hall in her own benefits</em>
but our mayor has been controlling and handling the town hall (or "local government") for her own benefit.
<em>(as a big part of the politicians groups)</em>
as have many politicians (I'm not 100% sure what you wanted to say here)
<em>taking the control and earning economic benefits for her and his husband (known for being part of Rato's scandal).</em>
her husband
<em>Here in the town hall, on the plenary sessions a lot of people that were claiming for being evicted from their homes are being censored</em>
Here in the town hall, during the plenary sessions a lot of people that were fighting against being evicted from their homes are being censored
<em>and this is not a correct behaviour that a public charge must have.</em>
and this is not the correct behaviour that a public charge should show.
better: this is not the correct way a public representative should act
<em> Another reason why a lot of people don't want to see her in the town hall is caused because of the elevated percentage of people who are unemployed,</em>
Another reason why a lot of people don't want to see her in the town hall is because of the elevated (or high) percentage of people who are unemployed,
<em>the 40,7% of the citizens are unemployed and this percentage is higher in young people. </em>
40,7% of the citizens are unemployed and this percentage is highest among young people.
<em>So, the new mayor come from a new political group based on the union of different extreme left-side political groups, </em>
So, the new mayor comes from a new political group based on the union* of different extreme left-wing political groups,
* a good word here would be "amalgamation", meaning the same thing as union in this context, but often used when talking about political groups.
<em>he looks like more devoted than his predecessor and his speeches sound nearer than reality. </em>
he looks like he is more devoted than his predecessor and his speeches sound nearer to reality.
<em>I hope that he will be transparent with the information about the accounts of the city town</em>
I hope that he will be transparent with the information surrounding the financial accounts of the <em>city town</em> (?? just city, or town; not both)
<em>and he let us guide him on the decisions that he will have to take it respecting the opinion of his voters.</em>
and he let us guide him on the decisions that he will have to take and respecting the opinion of his voters.


