Vale Carioca Farm
Vale Carioca Farm selects animals with a high genetic value. Its main focus is the Gene Mapping of Milk A2 (beta-casein), which brings a lot of advantages for both health and sustainable development, respecting the animals and the environment. Furthermore we possess a stock with the best genetics from the country and the world.
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I'd just add a comma after "Furthermore" and that's about it. And you might want to try to reformulate the part that says "a lot of advantages for health" with the term "health benefits"; but that's not necessary. Good job.
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