The guy I met

I finally found the perfect guy,

I finally found the prefect face, the perfect body.

I found the perfect laugh, the perfect smile,

with perfect voice and perfect social skills,

I finally found the perfect mind...

and his perfect girlfriend. ????????

The guy I met.

I finally found the perfect guy, with a perfect face and body, with a perfect laugh and smile, with a perfect voice and social skills, with a perfect mind. But with one big imperfect part. The girlfriend.

Dasha, you have rather overused "with" and "and" it's usual to avoid repetitions. Compare these:

1  "I finally found the perfect guy, with a perfect face, body, laugh, smile, voice, social skills and mind. But with one big imperfect part. The girlfriend."

2  "I finally found the perfect guy, everything was perfect, his face, his body, his laugh, his smile, his voice, his social skills and his mind. Just one big imperfect part - his girlfriend."