Recently, there is have been disputes about whether the eating habits have been changed comparing with older generations. It is clear that some more people prefer the fast food more than older generations. However, I totally agree with this view. This essay will justify my opinion. 

First, there is are a lot of fast food restaurants in many countries. People can eat and buy these foods easily. Some people say that the fast food helps people who do not have enough time to eat a sit down meal their meal. In addition, the fast food is very comfortable easy to eat and saves people time can save the time. 

On the other hand, some people say that the fast food doesn’t have not enough nutrition nutrients, so it is not healthy does not help to people. Because, The taste of fast food is the most extreme and because there is a lot of salt and oil. Furthermore, people tend to find like more extreme tastes, so the fast food is changed to have more and more extreme tastes by the CEO.  It situation is really dangerous for people’s to save their health. The proportion amount of condiments keeps increasing consistently. 

According to newspapers in Korea, the teenager obesity in teenagers has was dramatically increased in modern society because most teenagers prefer the fast food more than to slow food. When comparing older generations to and now, children in older generations cannot did not eat the fast food. They always ate always slow food, fruits, and vegetables, so they had balanced of eating habits and were in a good condition. 

In conclusion, this situation is alarming for not only for children but also adults. People should will change this phenomenon. I agree that it is not bad if children eat the fast food once a week, but its the fastfood drawbacks should not be ignored.

Notes:  

1. "Recently" is almost always used with past progressive. (recently....have...)

2. When speaking in general, don't use "the"

3. When comparing two things, use "more" not "some".

4. "I totally agree with this view":  Normally, we would not say this after writing. "It is clear that..." Because you are stating it as a fact, not an opinion.

5.  You can't write "their meal" because their meal is fast food.  They are eating fast food because they don't have time to eat "a different type of meal"

6.  We don't normally refer to food as "comfortable."

7. use "don't have" instead of "have not enough"

8. Nutrients are the good things inside of food, nutrition is "the state of eating healthy food and exercising"

9. Saying the taste of fast food is the "Most extreme" is strange, because you are comparing the flavor to all different types of food.

10.  "proportion" is a comparison word, and you don't use it unless you say what you are comparing it to.

11. You can't use "will" here, because you cannot tell the future.

Good work!