the park
The park near my house is full of activity on a sunny weekend afternoon.
As soon as you come in, you notice, on the left, a wide green space centered by a with a small artificial lake in the center, surrounded by a lot of boys and girls chilling on the grass.
Going on, on Further along the both sides of the path, people enjoy the sun. On the left side there is a children area for children, where many mothers play with their little boys.
On the right side you can see a big forest, where birdwatchers try to catch a glimpse of birds' birds in flight or nature lovers enjoying the perfume fragrance and the sight of thousands of old trees.
Next to the children area for children, groups of people exercise under the sun. Young boys and girls practice bodyweight exercises using bars and parallettes, and behind them a yoga class enjoy the trees’ shadow and the fresh air.
At the end of the park there is another small artificial lake, where someone feeds animals, young painters capture the moment and other people comfortably read their books.
During the weekend in the park there are plenty of people who enjoy the sun.
Nicely done. Well written and expressive.