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Have you heard about The cat mom incident in korea? Hey long time no talk. How's going on? I am normally afraid of animals (especially the cat) but your family geri seems pretty chic. It's unblance. Not tom Haha and Have you heard the cat mum incident? I wrote diary. You can read it. These days it is very big issue in korea. The midnight partis main hero is truly hanker about 1920's paris artist and writers. and when he was traveling in paris with his fiance he was really back to 1920's paris. So the movie is going to happen on the movie. You seem interested in a loaf of science things like books.movies Are you often read books? How many? recently I bought 3 books but i didnt read them yet. I am lazy... My one of goal read them within this year. Yeah It may be mandarin goby. My goby is just normal :( AndI decided to buy djing stuff to development my hobby. but this is quite expensive! Also. I have worry to be sick of djing that even I checked gumtree,uk(To buy used stuff) but I think it isn't good idea so i would buy them during black friday sales days on website! because I am leaving korea this friday so i wouldn't play djing until december. I am thinking to my name for djing. Do you have any good idea? If i couldn't get any good idea. I would be 땡구. My family and best friend called me 땡구( It is a bit funny and cute nuance) Have a good day. Cheers!!
Oct 19, 2015 1:01 AM
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Have you heard about The cat mom incident? This crime incident made by some minors in korea. Why it is called The cat mom incident. Some older women wanted to help the cats that who live on the street with dangerous things.(So she called cat mom now)
The cat mom gave her feedstuffs to cats on the street in same place every day for them. But when she was helping of the cats that she had shocked from fall of the brick by criminals then she died at the moment.
So korean focus on this happened. also korean police really tried to find the criminal.
But when police found criminals. They are just elementary school students. They said excuse this happen was for gravity test but they dont learning it at this age. Korean nationality broadcast KBS had aired about how to judgment to minors. How they do judgment to minors in abroad like this happen.
What do you think about this happening?

 


Thank you for correcting my diary. Someone asked me about it but I couldn't explain well So i am writing it now. Cheers!

 

October 19, 2015

Hey long time no see talk. How's What’s going on? 
I am normally afraid of animals (especially the cats) 
but your family’s cat Jerry geri seems pretty chic. It's unbalance. Not a Tom Haha 
and Have you heard about the cat mum lady incident? I wrote a diary about it. You can read it. 
These days it is a very big issue in Korea. 
The main hero in Midnight In Paris is truly hanker is entranced with about 1920's paris artists and writers, and when he was traveling in Paris with his fiancee he was really is sent back to 1920's Paris. So the movie is going to happen on the movie
You seem interested in a lot of science things like books and movies.
Are Do you often read books? How many? Recently I bought 3 books 
but I didnt haven’t read them yet. I am lazy... 
One of my goals is to read them within this year. 
Yeah it may be a <em>mandarin goby</em>. My goby is just normal :( 
And I decided to buy DJ’ing stuff to development for my hobby. 
but this it is quite expensive! 
Also. I have worried I might get to be sick of DJ’ing that even so I checked gumtree,ukb(a website for used stuff) but I think it isn't good idea so I would will buy them it online during Black Friday sales days on website! 
I am leaving Korea this friday so I wouldn't play won’t start DJ’ing until December. 
I am thinking about what my DJ name should be. for djing
Do you have any good ideas? 
If i couldn't can’t think of a good name, get any good idea. I would will be DJ 땡구. (I like 땡글, 땜글)
My family and my best friend called me 땡구( It is a bit funny and cute nuance) 
Have a good day. 
Cheers!!

 

Notes:

 

I like the use of “hanker”, but it is normally used if you have a unsatisfied desire.  It is strange to hanker for a person.  

I don't understand the sentences. "It is unbalanced. Not a Tom"  It sounds like a funny way of saying the cat had been neutered.

“Are” is used with nouns.  “Are you a book?”

“Didn’t” is used in the past.  Because you STILL haven’t read the books, you need to use “haven’t”

“within” is just strange here.

I have no idea what a Mandarin Goby is.  A type of fish?

“To develop”: development is a noun.  You can say “for the development of my hobby”, but it is not very natural.

You could use “this” if you were showing the person a picture of the “DJ’ing Stuff”

You can say “I am sick of _____”, but in the past and future tense you will almost always say, “I got sick of it” “I will get sick of it”

“would” is used if you are not going to buy the equipment. “I would buy it online during Black Friday, but….”

“I am thinking about what ______ should ______”.  This is a common structure.

“Couldn’t” is past tense.

(Side note: 땜글 and 땡글 sound like “Damn girl” and “Dang girl”.  If you hear something that sounds really good, you might say, “Damn girl! That was amazing!” So it is funny.)

October 23, 2015
아니 원래 이걸 올리려고한게아니었는데. 이건 제 언어 교환 친구랑 한 이야기 였어요. 엄청 큰 실수를 했네요. 삭제하는 법을 모르겠어서 그냥 냅두력고요.ㅎㅎ 공부 열심히 합시다. 파이팅!! Oh I had a huge mistake actually I am going to update other one. This one is reply to my langauge exchanger partner. I watch in korean for sure..:( Thank you for cheers me. You too!
October 19, 2015
Oh I've seen Midnight in Paris too. It's a pleasant movie! Did you watch it in English? If so, it might be a little hard for you to follow haha, but your English is pretty good! Keep studying! ^_^
October 19, 2015
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