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I made "Wii remote control　cushion” Hello. Today I made Wii remote control cushion. It was so easy and cheap. First,I prepared the white cloth and thred. Next,I sew pieces of cloth together. I like sewing cushion and soft toy. Because It is the only one in the world. Thank you for your reading. If you find a mistake my notebook,could you correct it? thank you.

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I made a "Wii remote control cushion”

 

Hello.


Today I made a Wii remote control cushion. It was so easy and cheap.  First, I prepared the white cloth and thread. Next, I sewed the pieces of cloth together. I like sewing cushions and soft toys, because they are the only ones in the world. (I like sewing cusions and soft toys because it means i can create something unique that no one else in the world has)

Thank you for your reading my notebook. If you find a mistake, could you correct it please?

Thank you.

 

Great idea! Don't forget that you don't need a line break for each sentence. Each sentences should come one after the other. Unless you are starting a new paragraph. You start a new paragraph when you a writing a new thought.

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I made a "Wii remote control　cushion”

Hello.
Today I made a Wii remote control cushion.
It was so easy and cheap.
First, I prepared the white cloth and thread.
Next, I sewed the pieces of cloth together.
I like sewing cushions and soft toys.
Because It is the only one in the world.

Thank you for your reading.
If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?

Thank you.

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Pabloさん ありがとう(*'ω｀*)！ I'm so glad~
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とてもかわいいですよ、 good job! (^=˃ᆺ˂)
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haha(´^ω^`)Thank you.I'm glad you like that. I will sleep well for this. thank you for your comment.arigatou

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