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Iryna
The autumn The autumn has fallen on my city. Yesterday I could wear only short dress, because the jacket seemed inappropriate. It was hot. And sometimes I looked at the data for being sure that it's September. But today everything has changed. The first thing that I saw through the window in the morning was the darkness outside. I looked at the watch. It was 7:00 a.m. So it wasn't night. It was storm clouds. I made myself to get up. The warm shower didn't help at all. It made me dream about warm bath and ignoring work. I ate my breakfast next to laptop. I wrapped in a blanket, swich on my favorite show and almost forget about necessity to go to office. But the world is cruel. To lighten the mood I wear the red dress. I understood my mistake at the bus station. It was too cold for red dress. The jacket couldn't help and after 10 minutes I shaking, shaking very much. I looked at the women in cloaks and jeloused them. But I don't want to came back for mine, because I knew that nobody can take me away if I entered my house.

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The autumn

The autumn has fallen on my city. Yesterday I could wear only short dress, because the jacket seemed inappropriate. It was hot. And sometimes I looked at the data for being sure that it's September. But today everything has changed. The first thing that I saw through the window in the morning was the darkness outside. I looked at the watch. It was 7:00 a.m. So it wasn't night. It was storm clouds. I made myself to get up. The warm shower didn't help at all. It made me dream about warm bath and ignoring work. I ate my breakfast next to laptop. I wrapped in a blanket, ((swiched)) on my favorite show and almost  ((forgot)) about necessity to go to office. But the world is cruel. To lighten the mood I wear the red dress. I understood my mistake at the bus station. It was too cold for red dress. The jacket couldn't help and after 10 minutes I (was) shaking, shaking very much. I looked at the women in cloaks and (envied) them. But I don't want to came back for mine, because I knew that nobody (could) take me away if I entered my house.

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