ESSAY
Write a short essay about on wheter or not sport should be a compulsory school subject. Give your opinion with reasons and arguments
First of all, it is important to emphasize that
, nowadays
, school subjects have an influence on students. Everything depends on how students feel about each subject.
In this essay I would like to explain how sport
have has a positive effect on children and why
may it should be a compulsory school subject.
Some people tend to think that, students do not need to do
any sport at school on account
of that they have the opportunity to do it in their daily life.
In my case,
as I consider
doing any sport at school
to have several benefits. Firstly, sport is such as “break” in their daily routine.
Not exactly sure what you mean when you say "such as break" Secondly, children can improve their social skills because
of doing a sport
have has many positive aspects such as solidarity, work
ing as a team, etc. Furthermore, with
an the increase
of the in social skills,
there should be a decrease
at in bullying due
to the fact that when a little child plays with others is
an enjoyable time for them. Therefore there is not any time to think about bullying.
To sum up, I strongly believe that sport
s should be a compulsory school subject because there are more benefits than drawbacks and this subject is one of the most significant subjects for children nowadays. A subject which everyone loves.
I can tell that you have a clear understanding of what you want to say. You know how to structure sentences, but you struggle to make the sentences flow. Some of you plural and tenses need working on slightly but most of the essay can be understood. You are clearly an advanced English writer, maybe you need more practise with sentence structures and your tense participles during tour speech. Feel free to contact me if there is any other way that I can help :)