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English is becoming a worldwide language, it's a tool to contact with the world.In China,we start learning English from kindergarten.Most young boys&girls can speak English well, so I must learn&I want to make friends with person who comes from different country.I want to learn more different cultures.
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Thank you boy. I registered last night, you're the first person to comment me,thanks.
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Basically you write very well. Just a little mistake about punctuation.
Notice that the grammar in English is different from Chinese.
You cannot put two verbs in a single sentence without any conjunctions or clauses.
Say that in the first sentence, you need to add a conjunction if want to use comma.
Otherwise just use full stop to end the sentence.
Besides, culture is a uncountable noun.So just write different culture.
Hope what this can help u
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
English is becoming a worldwide language, it's a tool to contact with the world.In China,we start learning English from kindergarten.Most young boys&girls can speak English well, so I must learn&I want to make friends with person who comes from different countries.I want to learn more different cultures.
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