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plz help me!!! * I'll send the following e-mail to the company which is supposed to contract. plz collect the following sentences ASAP. ^^ Hello, Brett. Thank you for your promt reply. I’m Juhye Kim from the strategic planning dept. at OOP I will be replacing Mr. Kim on this contract . First, a title of our product is “Happy Jam”. I reviewed the attached contract and invoice. There should be some changes because of the recent spin-off of our company. I’d like to have the following changes made. Licensee : OOPT 3th Fl., Hoon Bldg. Okryeondong, Yeonsu gu, Incheon, Korea I also ask you to change the name of a person in charge from "Soonhji Ahn" to "Juhye Kim" I hope you resend me to collected contract. Thank you Regards, Juhye Kim

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plz help me!!!

* I'll send the following e-mail to the company which is supposed to contract.
plz collect the following sentences ASAP. ^^

Bret,

Thank you for your promt reply.
My name is Juhye Kim from the strategic planning Dept. at OOP and I will be replacing Mr. Kim for the current contract .

After reviewing the attached contract and invoice regarding our product, "Happy Jam", I have discovered that some changes are nessicary due to the recent changes within our company.

 


I’d like to have the following changes made.

Licensee : OOPT
3th Fl., Hoon Bldg. Okryeondong, Yeonsu gu, Incheon, Korea

Also if you could change the name of a person in charge from "Soonhji Ahn" to "Juhye Kim"

I really appreciate your help and Thanks in Advance

Sincerely,
Juhye Kim

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plz help me!!!

* I'll send the following e-mail to the company which is supposed to contract.
plz collect the following sentences ASAP. ^^

Hello, Brett.

Thank you for your prompt reply.
I’m Juhye Kim from the Strategic Planning Dept. at OOP
I will be replacing Mr. Kim on this contract .

First, the title of our product is “Happy Jam”.
I reviewed the attached contract and invoice.
There should be some changes made because of the recent spin-off of our company.
I’d like to have the following changes made.

Licensee : OOPT
3th Fl., Hoon Bldg. Okryeondong, Yeonsu gu, Incheon, Korea

I also ask you to change the name of a person in charge from "Soonhji Ahn" to "Juhye Kim"

I hope you will resend to me the revised contract.
Thank you

Regards,
Juhye Kim

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plz help me!!!

* I'll send the following e-mail to the company which is supposed to contract.
plz collect the following sentences ASAP. ^^

Hello, Brett.

Thank you for your promt reply.
I’m Juhye Kim from the strategic planning dept. at OOP (Use the full word department)
I will be replacing Mr. Kim on this contract .

First, a title of our product is “Happy Jam”.  (the) (the)
I reviewed the attached contract and invoice.
There should be some changes because of the recent spin-off of our company. (What is a spin-off??) 
I’d like to have the following changes made.    :

Licensee : OOPT
3th Fl., Hoon Bldg. Okryeondong, Yeonsu gu, Incheon, Korea

I also ask you to change the name of a person in charge from "Soonhji Ahn" to "Juhye Kim".  (the)

I hope you resend me to collected contract. (I don't quite understand this statement)
Thank you

Regards,
Juhye Kim

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thank you very much :)
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Dear Brett, Greetings! Thank you from your prompt reply.My name is Juhye Kim from the strategic planning department at OOP. I will be replacing Mr.Kim on this contract. First,The title of our product is "happy Jam".I reviewed the attached contract and invoice.There should be some changes because of the recent spin-off of our company. I prefer to have this modifications be made to my statements. Licensee : OOPT 3rd Flr.Hoon Bldg.Okryeondong,Yeonsu gu Incheon,Korea. May I request you to change the name of a person in charge from Soonhji Ahn to Juhye Kim. I hope you will send me the modified contract. Thank you. Regards, Juhye Kim "When you send or make business letters always exercise courtesy and politeness.It is proper to be formal.Ok? Hope it can help also. Regards!

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