Boxing as a Sports

Have you ever experienced any combat sports?

For me, many years ago I had chosen boxing as a type of combat sports physical activity to my rambunctious nature when I was still little. This anecdote was refer to the time when i was child , At the same time, my parents wanted to get a respite from me and for my physical health to be enrolled in some sporting activity.  decided to sent me to the athlete for two reasons , At first they needs the time to take a rest and according to the history of my life ,They found me very playful and for burnt my energy planed to register me in a amatory combat classes .the second reasons was they were be very careful about my health and they wished to see the way of my growth all in success full way. [This is a very long winded way of saying the same thing]For the first time in my life, I strictly begged my mother take plan for to register me in for a football's course class.  , But lucky Unfortunately for me, those courses were be the class was full of member and the only way remain for her were indicating her regret to and she said sorry to me. Unfortunately before left my mother get the chance to get ride of the evil child ,One of the Fortunately for her to get rid of this "evil" child, a coach of in this the gym called us and suggested to my mother a boxing course for me... Because at this time since I was fit and in shape. ,any way get

Anyway, I digress, back to the my topic. This type of sports Boxing is a very violent sport and can injure a lot to your brain easily.  I know many people after who are retired of this sport from it, gets Parkinson disease. and The sufferers have no control on their speech or their his speaking ,shaking hands and head facial movements. Their speech is impeded and gets confused all the time about the event happened all things happening around them.....I believe this type of sports is very brutal and not even  need a strong body can withstand the effects of the punches for a long period of time. ......

First of all, I am only guessing from the context.  So I can be wrong.

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Look forward to your next entry and thanks for sharing a slice of your life.