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Risanita Fardian
My November First Day is A Jogging Day! November 1st, 2012 It’s November first day! Today, I started new resolution (and really hope I can do it as habit, a new and good habit). It’s 2.45 p.m when rain fell, quiet hard and I felt worry that I had to cancel my plan today. It’s a jogging day, I said to myself. Neither I can jog in the morning nor afternoon, at least once a day. For today, I planed to jog in afternoon. It’s a rainy day in afternoon then. Fortunately, at 3.30 pm the rain stopped. I dressed up and started jog at 4.00 pm . I’m very grateful for the rain, it made the weather so cool and very comfortable for jogging. Alhamdulillah.... :D I remembered that when I was junior high school, every Saturday morning I would come to city sport hall (GOR—Gelanggang Olahraga) in Padang, my hometown. Many people had sport there, jogging, bycycling, practicing taekwondo, senam (what is ‘senam’ in English? Aerobic?) and many more. I had jog with my bestfriend, Jeanne. Even we went to tepi laut (sea side?), it’s quiet far about 13 miles perhaps, can be more. Yup, I could walk 13 miles more 9 years ago. But now, it’s almost impossible for me, it’s really far exactly, hahaha.... I took some picture while I jogged. I realized that there are many beautiful spots to take pictures in my college. Perhaps, I can attach some of them here. I think around the library center building is one of favorite spot. I took its picture across the lake, try to get the whole view of library building. I also took the picture of Rektorat Building and trees. It’s beautiful, isn’t it?

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My November First Day is A Jogging Day!

November 1st, 2012

It’s November the first ! Today, I started a resolution (and really hope I can do it as habit, a new and good habit). It was 2.45 p.m when rain fell, quiet hard and I felt worried that I had to cancel my plan today. It’s a jogging day, I said to myself. Either I can jog in the morning or the afternoon, at least once a day. For today, I planned to jog in afternoon. But it was a rainy day in afternoon then. Fortunately, at 3.30 pm the rain stopped. I dressed up and started to jog at 4.00 pm . I’m very grateful for the rain, it made the weather so cool and very comfortable for jogging. Praise to Allah !.... :D

I remembered that when I was at (or in) junior high school, every Saturday morning I would come to the city sport hall (GOR—Gelanggang Olahraga) in Padang, my home town. Many people played sport (or sports)  there: jogging, bycycling, practicing taekwondo, senam (what is ‘senam’ in English? Aerobic?)  (It's aerobics) and many more. I used to jog with my bestfriend, Jeanne. We even went to tepi laut (the sea side? Yes), it’s quite far about 13 miles perhaps, maybe more. Yup, I could walk 13 miles more than 9 years ago. But now, it’s almost impossible for me, it’s really far exactly, hahaha....

I took some pictures while I jogged. I realized that there are many beautiful spots to take pictures in my college. Perhaps I can attach some of them here. I think around the library center building is one of my favorite spots. I took its picture across the lake, trying to get the whole view of the library building. I also took a picture of Rektorat Building and trees. It’s beautiful, isn’t it?

 

Good work !! Your mistakes are all because of the differences between English and bahasa Indonesia: not knowing when to use articles (a and the) because there are none in Indo, writing plurals as singulars (because Indo  rarely uses plurals), and tenses because Indo ones are so much simpler.

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Udah kerja? Traktiirrrr :D I miss our times so bad :(
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Sekarang di Jakarta, Ci^ik..... :D
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Isaaa, sebenernya lagi di Pku ato di Jakarta? >_<

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