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Second ticket I am a man,which cant sleep when it really need. Night it is a time for phylosophy,time for rhetorical questions Has our life the meaning?? When superman will take me out from this fuck planet ? ^^

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Second ticket

I am a man,which cant sleep when it really need.
Night it is a time for phylosophy,time for rhetorical questions
Has our life the meaning??
When superman will take me out from this fuck planet ? ^^

 

I am a man who cannot sleep when I really need it.

The night is a time for philosophy---a time for rhetorical questions.

Does our life have meaning?

When will Superman take me off this fucking planet?

 

After a person, we say "who" or "that," never "which."

Articles are tricky; we usually use them, but not always, e.g. "What is the meaning of life?  Life has no meaning."

"Fuck" is an interjection; "fucking" is an adjective.  Neither is appropriate in formal writing, but the could be used in dialogue or poetry, which I guess this is....

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