When Even though I was growing up, with both of my parents working, ed outside. they made sure that they have enough time to guided me very well. I got had the proper care, the attention and the love from them both my parents. During holidays, they made plans to make sure that the family spend time together. But However, looking back, sometimes I felt feel lonely. I wish I could have spend even more time with my parent them during my childhood. 

In conclusion, If parents would take more time to properly take care ensure that their children are properly taken care of, then negative aspects on them will be minimized. would not be happen. Spend proper time with their children. Whether such as it may be in the mornings, in the evenings, during weekends, morning, to know or whatever the time is needed, monitoring their growing up properly is a must. growth progress. We can not cannot deny the importance of both material wealth and quality time.  parent and money for growing their child. Money helps to bring good life style and ultimately benefit to whole family. Without the financial security to the family, another whole set of negative aspects will set in...

"Cannot" IS ONE WORD; not two.

Some people think, that if both parents work, go outside to do job. They will earn enough money for The additional income will benefit their children. They can arrange all kind of things for their child such as: car, mobile, video games[All these are understood.  It is better to write something different and add more value to your essay and argument]. With more material comfort, the children will have a happier   Moreover, They can provide best education and better environment to their children. They can do all type of fun and live happily due to extra wealth. What kind of impact on their lives if everyday they have to worry about food on the table for the next day?  Even though parents would to shield such things from them, children are not stupid.  They can detect and feel the tension in the air.

On the other hand, some people [Redundant.  Of course it has to be people. This is not a fairytale where animals can talk] says that only wealth having financial well being can not cannot do not provide good moral education. It can not cannot There is no one home to teach them their cultural knowledge and social heritage and values to their children. Working parent might not able to care their child progress such as: Is their children doing well in class, not doing any kind of wrong work. Both working parents may not have enough time to take care of their emotional needs; to teach them the lessons of life or to know what is right and wrong.  Let take Taking an personal example: During my college days period, I was doing a part time job as a home tutor. I taught a seventh class grade pupil student whose mother and father both was doing parents were working outside. I only saw them only twice or thrice time in the month. Rarely, do they asked me about their child's progress report. Moreover, in the absence of the parents, their child might get involve in wrong work. unsavory activities such as drinking, smoking or worse, taking drugs taking etc.

Family

In today's competitive world, many families find it necessary for both parents to go out to work. while some say the children in these families benefit from the additional income. Others feel they lack of support because of their parents' absence. Write your views.?

The family is place where we spend our childhood. We learn the tradition, culture from our family members. In a typical family, parents and their children live with their parents. together whereas The father goes to do a job is the bread winner [or "brings home the bacon"] while the and mother takes care of the little ones. her child at home. She teaches to her child them their about cultural values, the language of their ancestors and many other unquantifiable values more. She cooks healthy food for her child. She gives love.  and help to her child She helps and make sure that they are safe and secure. On the other hand, today's competitive world makes it necessary for both parents to go outside to do work. It has There are both negative and positive aspects on the life lives of their children.