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Do You Like Gay ? It is hard to say our attitude is like or not like.Maybe u think homosexuality violate god’s thought,maybe u think homosexuality is dirty.But i believe everyone have rights to get happiness,no matter u are gay or lesbian or straight.In China,many gays choosen married with a woman,they have a lot of reasons,like want a child,dont wanna others talk about him .but he still unhappy and his wife is unhappy,to.Finally,his wife know.But in China,we haven‘t so many rules about gay and gay marriage,so,the lawyer dont know how to do. There are good people and bad people in world,there are good people and bad people in homosexuality world.I wish our government can make rules,and i believe god not hate u because u are homosexuality,god love u because u love life and u help others,because u study hard and u know ur dream.

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Do You Like Gays ?

It is hard to say our attitude is like or not like. Maybe you think homosexuality violates God’s thought, or maybe you think homosexuality is dirty, but I believe everyone have rights to get happiness, no matter they are gay, lesbian or straight. In China, many gays have chosen to marry with a woman. They have a lot of reasons, like wanting a child, or not wanting others to talk about them. However, they are still unhappy and their wives are unhappy,too. Finally though, their wives know, eventually. However, in China, we haven‘t so many rules about gays and gay marriage, so the lawyers don't know what to do.
There are good people and bad people in world, and there are good people and bad people in the homosexual world. I wish our government could make rules, and I believe God does not hate you because you are a homosexual. God loves you because you love life and you help others, because you study hard and you are achieve your dream.

 

[Good work.  I made the sentences plural because your sentence started the subject in the plural, so that the rest of them would also have to be plural.  Remember to leave a space after all periods and commas.  As for you opinion, the point may not be whether people like gays, but if they are ready to accept them without condemnation.]

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actually,i want say our government should make rules,after all ,many things need laws~

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yep, sure
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@ Ronal Diantry like my friend ~actually,if uhave a friend is gay ,u will feel it is not important between your friendship~:)
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I feel weird when I see gay

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