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我的第一 entry 大家好， 我叫 Melissa。我的中文不太好 但是我觉得中文是很好！ 我会说一点中文因为，即使我知道一点中文词汇，中文是很难 :( My grammar is probably completely wrong, so please offer any corrections :)

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我的第一篇记录 （entry means ”record” here）


大家好， 我叫 Melissa。我的中文不太好， 但是我觉得中文是很好很棒(in fact, you think chinese is an amazing language, it is  interesting and useful, right?) !


我会说一点中文，因为，但是，即使我知道一点中文词汇，中文还是很难.( 虽然......但是......，即使......还是......，即使......也......，即使......仍然......) for example: 虽然我会说一点中文，但是中文很难；即使我知道一点中文词汇，中文还是很难；即使我会说一点中文，也知道一点中文词汇，中文仍然很难。）中文的连词用法是难点，加油。

My grammar is probably completely wrong, so please offer any corrections :)


very well written! I am Michelle from China. I can help you with chinese,  my skype: michelle8641, let's talk everything .

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Hi, I think your chinese is good, I totally understand you. But  I do think you need  to work on the 的. 


In chinese grammar, When you say "I think chinese is good", the complete version is "I think chinese is good (language). This good is a adj here. And when a word is used as adj, it should be end with a 的。


So, good adj.  is 很好的。 我觉得中文是很好的。Same happens on chinese is difficult.


Another problem is that, 因为、即使 doesn't make sence here, what's the english version of this sentence?


Anyway. I think your english is good. And I also think I have grammar problem in this reply. I'll appericiate if you point it out.


Regards

Leo Soong

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我的第一 entry

大家好， 我叫 Melissa。我的中文不太好 但是我觉得中文很有趣！

我会说一点中文，因为，即使我知道一点中文词汇，中文是很难 :(

My grammar is probably completely wrong, so please offer any corrections :)
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我的第一篇 entry

大家好， 我叫 Melissa。我的中文虽然不太好， 但是我觉得中文是很好（很有趣）！

我会说一点中文。因为，即使因为我只知道一点中文词汇，中文对我来说是个很难的语言 :(


Not sure if this is entirely what you wanted to express but the highlighted words are just some words you can consider using! Otherwise, great job there!

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我的第一篇 entry

大家好， 我叫 Melissa。我的中文不太好；但是我觉得中文是很好的，因为我会说一点中文因为。即使我知道一点中文词汇，但我仍然觉得中文是很难的 :(

My grammar is probably completely wrong, so please offer any corrections :)



good job！

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