Day 5. Please, correct my mistakes "The maze runner"... The interesting book. Some characters behave strange. And this labyrinth..." I thought, having read some regular chapters. "Anyway, some bullshi

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Edward Malone

Day 5. Please, correct my mistakes "The maze runner"... The interesting book. Some characters behave strange. And this labyrinth..." I thought, having read some regular chapters. "Anyway, some bullshit." After reading and having done my homework I noticed I had nothing to do today. It was early evening. I took my bike and rode to Cheerfultown. As usual the first place I visited was a local pub. I came in and noticed Jonh... As usual... "Good evening, my dear fellow" he said... As usual... "Greeting, John! Did you expect something like this?" "Do you mean Spain? No, I thought they would tear us apart" "I already know the first semi-final member. Croatia" I said meaningfully. John was thinking about it for a few minutes, looking at me expessionally. "Such an interesting thought." He said. "At first they will tear Denmark, then us. "Are you kidding? Maybe they can defeat Denmark, but we'll show them how to dance". "Of course! Let's bet again". "Sure"

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Day 5. Please, correct my mistakes.

'The maze runner', is an interesting book, some characters behave strangely.

And this labyrinth..." I thought, having read some regular chapters. "Anyway, some bullshit."

Sorry Edward, I'm not sure what you are saying in the above highlighted sentence.

After reading and having done finished my homework, I noticed realised I had nothing to do today. It was early evening, so I took my bike and rode to Cheerfultown.

As usual the first place I visited was a local pub. I came walked in and noticed John. Jonh... As usual...

"Good evening, my dear fellow", John said, as he always does.

"Greetings, John! Did you expect something like this?", I asked.

"Do you mean Spain? No, I thought they would tear us apart", he said.

"I already know the first semi-final member, Croatia", I said meaningfully.

John was thinking about it for a few minutes, looking at me expessionally. I would suggest he is either expressionless, with no expression. Or else you need to put the expression he has on his face. Looking at me with surprise, looking at me puzzled.

"Such an interesting thought", he said.

"At first they will tear Denmark, then us", who said?

"Are you kidding? Maybe they can defeat Denmark, but we'll show them how to dance", who said?

"Of course! Let's bet again", who said?

"Sure", who said?

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Hello Edward!! Nice story .... great dialogue about the World Cup! The match of Russia x Croatia was really good, hope to see new chapter soon !! :)

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