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Question about the punctuation use.
1. "Too many people haven't seen much of that around here," he said, "life is full of hope and we need to live life before it's gone."
2. "Too many people haven't seen much of that around here," He said. "Life is full of hope and we need to live life before it's gone."
Could someone help and tell me which one is correct?
Apr 7, 2024 5:59 AM
Answers · 2
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Both versions are correct, but they convey slightly different nuances in terms of punctuation usage and capitalization.
The first version uses a comma after "here," which indicates that the dialogue tag ("he said") is part of the same sentence as the preceding dialogue. The first letter of "life" is lowercase because it continues the same sentence as the preceding dialogue. This version feels like one continuous thought with the dialogue and the tag connected.
The second version capitalizes "He said" as it treats it as a separate sentence from the preceding dialogue. This creates a slight pause between the dialogue and the tag, giving it a different rhythm. Additionally, "Life" is capitalized because it starts a new sentence.
Both versions are grammatically correct, but the choice between them depends on the style and flow you prefer.
April 7, 2024
Both versions are correct and mean the same to most people. However for some people and those that are concerned about punctuation and actually read the punctuation. The second version with "He said" being capitalised would probably if reading the sentence out aloud, say "He said" with the capitalised "He said" -> say that part much louder giving it much more stress than the first version "he said".
It was actually a little difficult at first to spot the only difference between the two 'he said" versus "He said".
April 7, 2024
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