Search from various English teachers...
Sandy Lu
I'm going to advertise my hometown as a tourist destination. Please help me with this video script. It's very important. I don't want to make any mistake. Please correct the grammatical error. It'd be better if you could help refine it, make it sound natural and native. Many thanks!
_________________________________________________________
Hi, there! Welcome to YICHUN
I’m your tour guide today! I was born and raised here. So in this video, I’ll show you the top 10 things to do in YICHUN.
Yichun City ( Heilongjiang province) China, is known nationally as China’s largest forest capital.
Located in the northeast of China, about 2 hours from Harbin by bullet train, it is a fascinating city to add to your China itinerary.
No.1
As night falls on the snow village, the village is totally covered in snow and fairytale-like scenery awaits. Lanterns with Chinese characteristics give off warm light, kids dance their fireworks, and brilliant fireworks explode into the sky.
No. 2
As a gourmet, I’m pretty sure chicken stewed mushrooms will satisfy your taste. It is the most representative Northeastern Cuisine. All the ingredients come from nature. You will be warmly welcomed by the simple local farmers.
No.3
Yu hot springs is a relaxing getaway, where you can soak in a continuous flow of World Famous Natural Hot Mineral Water.
No. 4
There are loads of ways to play with snow, building a snowman, sliding down a snowy slope,
throwing hot water in air it will turn into ice crystals…. The ice and snow park is full of screams and laughter.
No. 5
Breathe the fresh air, take some exercise, and get a good sweat on. Cycling, skating, hiking through the winter forests and skiing are really chilly experience.
No. 6
Oh, yes. Don’t forget to buy some sophisticated local artefacts as gifts for your family and friends.
Sep 10, 2021 5:48 AM
Corrections · 1
I'm going to advertise my hometown as a tourist destination. Please help me with
this video script. It's very important. I don't want to make any mistake. Please
correct the grammatical error. It'd be better if you could help refine it, make
it sound natural and native. Many thanks!
_________________________________________________________ Hi, there! Welcome to
YICHUN I’m your tour guide today! I was born and raised here. So in this video,
I’ll show you the top 10 things to do in YICHUN. Yichun City ( Heilongjiang
province) China, is known nationally as China’s largest forest capital. Located
in the northeast of China, about 2 hours from Harbin by bullet train, it is a
fascinating city to add to your China itinerary. No.1 As night falls, the village is totally covered in snow and fairytale-like scenery
awaits. Lanterns with Chinese characteristics give off warm light, kids play with
their sparklers, and brilliant fireworks explode into the sky. No. 2 As a
gourmet, I’m pretty sure chicken stewed mushrooms will satisfy your taste. It is
the most representative Northeastern Cuisine. All the ingredients come from
nature. You will be warmly welcomed by the simple local farmers. No.3 Yu hot
springs is a relaxing getaway, where you can soak in a continuous flow of World
Famous Natural Hot Mineral Water. No. 4 There are loads of ways to play with
snow, building a snowman, sliding down a snowy slope, throwing hot water in the air so
it turns into ice crystals…. The ice and snow park is full of screams and
laughter. No. 5 Breathe the fresh air, take some exercise, and get a good sweat
on. Cycling, skating, hiking through the winter forests and skiing are a really
chilly (you mean it's cold? Or do you mean relaxing?) experience. No. 6 Oh, yes. Don’t forget to buy some sophisticated local
artefacts as gifts for your family and friends.
September 10, 2021
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Sandy Lu
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English
Articles You May Also Like

English Vocabulary for Using Microsoft Office at Work
23 likes · 3 Comments

How to Answer “How Was Your Weekend?” Naturally in English
53 likes · 29 Comments

Why Some Jokes Don’t Translate: Understanding Humor in English
15 likes · 6 Comments
More articles
