Kaori
Today's writing practice: 1) I want to change of fabric for my living room. 2) I like Tirolean and Alpen design like edelweiss, deer, Tirolean in a folk costume. 3) I found a online shop from South Tirol. 4) They are only German and Italian languages available, so I wrote a message in German to ask some questions. 5) One of my German friends checked my sentences and he said that it is absolutely unambiguous. 6) Therefore I sent my messege to the shop and I'm waiting for a reply. Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰
Sep 25, 2023 3:08 AM
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Today's writing practice: 1) I want to change of fabric for my living room. 2) I like Tirolean and Alpen design like Edelweiss, deer, and Tirolean in a folk costume. 3) I found an online shop from South Tirol. 4) There are only German and Italian languages available, so I wrote a message in German to ask some questions. 5) One of my German friends checked my sentences and he said that it is unambiguous. 6) Therefore I sent my message to the shop and I'm waiting for a reply. Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰
September 25, 2023
Today's writing practice: 1) I want to change the fabric for my living room. This needs to be explained. Rooms are not usually made of or covered with fabric. 2) I like Tirolean and Alpine designs like edelweiss, deer, and Tirolean folk costumes. 3) I found an online shop from/in South Tirol. 4) There were only German and Italian languages available, so I wrote a message in German to ask some questions. 5) One of my German friends checked my sentences and said that they were absolutely unambiguous. (sentences is plural) 6) Therefore I sent my messege to the shop and I'm waiting for a reply. Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰
Good job. I just don't understand the 'fabric' part. Maybe you mean decor, style, curtains,etc.?
September 25, 2023
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