Today, I held my friend’s birthday party. She turned 20. It was a special day. She is my otaku friend. I always go to the concert with her. I’m grateful to her. I can enjoy everything because I have a

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Today, I held my friend’s birthday party. She turned 20. It was a special day. She is my otaku friend. I always go to the concert with her. I’m grateful to her. I can enjoy everything because I have a good friend!

May 29, 2025 2:03 PM

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Today, I had a birthday party for my friend. She turned 20. It was a special day. She’s my anime-loving friend. I always go to concerts with her. I’m grateful to her. I can enjoy everything because I have such a good friend!

💡 Quick Tips (A2–B1 level): • ✅ “Had a birthday party” → Use “had” for parties, not “held” (more natural in English). • ✅ “Go to concerts” → Use plural when talking in general. • ✅ “Anime-loving friend” → “Otaku” isn’t commonly used in English. Say what she loves. • ✅ “Such a good friend” → Adds emphasis and is more natural here.

Jun 5, 2025 3:43 PM

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