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The Tim じぁん!!!
The weather was nice today. After my jog, I quickly rushed home to examine the items I collected from the park. I had planned to study chlorophyll, leaf pores, and film germs in pond water. However, peeling the skin off a leaf proved to be more challenging than I expected. The section I managed to remove was too thick to focus on and didn't yield the desired results.
On the other hand, the pond water was a fascinating sight, filled with a thriving colony of microorganisms. It was captivating to observe the strange movements of these tiny creatures. Needless to say, I thoroughly enjoyed this experience with my new microscope.
Sep 16, 2023 10:36 AM
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The weather was nice today. After my jog, I quickly rushed home to examine the
items I collected from the park. I had planned to study chlorophyll, leaf pores,
and film germs in pond water. However, peeling the skin off a leaf proved to be
more challenging than I expected. The section I managed to remove was too thick
to focus on and didn't yield the desired results. On the other hand, the pond
water was a fascinating sight, filled with a thriving colony of microorganisms.
It was captivating to observe the strange movements of these tiny creatures.
Needless to say, I thoroughly enjoyed this experience with my new microscope.
That looks interesting. There are no corrections to make to your text, this is perfect - your English is brilliant 😁.
September 16, 2023
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The Tim じぁん!!!
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English
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