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The Tim じぁん!!!
It's windy and rainy today, and the sudden temperature drop caught us off guard. Because of the weather, we had to postpone our zoo trip and instead explored the downtown area. I accidentally discovered a unique and mysterious shop called Alice on Wednesday, which seemed to sell items from the fairy tale. The entrance is so small that you have to crawl in, just like Alice going through the rabbit hole. The decor is amazing, with lots of mirrors creating an illusion that almost made me miss a section. After exploring the shop thoroughly, I decided to buy a pair of faux leather shoes and an Alice necklace. I definitely went over budget again today, but it's the weather's fault.
Oct 19, 2024 12:30 PM
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It's windy and rainy today, and the sudden temperature drop caught us off guard.
Because of the weather, we had to postpone our zoo trip and instead explored the
downtown area. I accidentally discovered a unique and mysterious shop called
Alice on Wednesday, which seemed to sell items from the fairy tale. The entrance
is so small that you have to crawl in, just like Alice going through the rabbit
hole. The decor is amazing, with lots of mirrors creating an illusion that
almost made me miss a section. After exploring the shop thoroughly, I decided to
buy a pair of faux leather shoes and an Alice necklace. I definitely went over
budget again today, but it's the weather's fault.
Amazing place. I wouldn’t really call Alice in Wonderland a fairy tale, I tend to think of older folk stories as those.
October 20, 2024
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It's windy and rainy today, and the sudden temperature drop caught us off guard. Because of the weather, we had to postpone our zoo trip and instead explore the downtown area. I accidentally discovered a unique and mysterious shop called Alice on Wednesday, which seemed to sell items from the fairy tale. The entrance is so small that you have to crawl in, just like Alice going (did) through the rabbit hole. The decor is amazing, with lots of mirrors creating an illusion that almost made me miss a section. After exploring the shop thoroughly, I decided to buy a pair of faux leather shoes and an Alice (Alice style/Alice in Wonderland style) necklace. I definitely went over (my) budget again today, but it's the weather's fault.
The suggestions I have made aren't entirely necessary as your version is fine.
October 20, 2024
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The Tim じぁん!!!
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English
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