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Q. Scholarships should be offered primarily on the financial need, rather than on academic achievement. Agree or disagree with this statement and give concrete examples to your answer.
I agree with the idea that scholarships should be offered primarily based on financial need, rather than academic achievement.
There are two reasons for this: equality of education and changing academic achievement.
First, I think education should be taken everyone equally. From that viewpoint, poor home have less way of taking education due to financial problems and such situation produce the educational gap. For correcting that situation, scholarship should be offered primarily based on financial need.
Second, academic achievement is things that can be changed. So I think academic achievement isn't suit for the norm of deciding that.
For these reasons, I agree with this statement that scholarships should be offered primarily based on economic reasons, rather than academic records.
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