At first, this looks like a daunting challenge for learners, because even slight differences in sounds might make you unable to understand anything.
Sep 26, 2021 1:54 AM
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This looks like a daunting challenge for beginners, because even the slightest errors in sounds might it totally incomprehensible.
I have suggested some changes for you. Your reading is ok but you could pay attention to intonation and pitch to make it more lively. The current tone is flat.
September 26, 2021
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