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Last week was the Chuseok holiday in Korea. I binge watched 'Squid Game' during the holiday. It is a Korean Netflix Original. The story is simple. 456 people with large depts and no hope in life are given an opportunity to take part in a dangerous game. There are social issues and social injustices all combined in the show. They explore everything in a very interesting way which is why many people love the show. By the way I am not advertising the show, I'm just practicing my writing skills.

Sep 26, 2021 11:34 AM

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"There was the Chuseok holiday last week in Korea*. I binge watched.... 456 people with large debts*

September 26, 2021

Last week was the Chuseok holiday in Korea. I binge watched a Korean Netflix Original series called 'Squid Game' during the holiday. The story is simple. 456 people with large debts and no hope in life are given an opportunity to take part in a dangerous game. There are social issues and social injustices all combined in the show. They explore everything in a very interesting way which is why many people love the show. By the way I am not advertising the show, I'm just practicing my writing skills.

Great post! I added some corrections that can help you make longer sentences. I also recently finished watching Squid Game and I agree that it is a very interesting show. I loved it!

September 26, 2021

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