Search from various English teachers...
The Tim じぁん!!!
It was drizzly today, but that didn't ruin Chloe's birthday party plans. We arrived at the indoor mini zoo around six o'clock. The zookeeper gave us a tour and taught us about all the animals. The giant millipede was a big hit; everyone loved it. It can grow to be about as thick as my wrist. Since it was in the petting zoo area, we could touch and play with it. I didn't count, but the zookeeper said it has 700 legs. I even touched a tarantula! Despite its appearance, it's actually very shy and furry. Later, I just happened to witness two raccoons fight over something. This was the most unusual birthday party ever. We cut the cake surrounded by guinea pigs, capybaras, parrots, and various bugs. What a great day!
Sep 8, 2024 1:38 PM
Corrections · 4
1
It was drizzling today, but that didn't ruin Chloe's birthday party plans. We arrived at the indoor mini zoo around six o'clock. The zookeeper gave us a tour and taught us about all the animals. The giant millipede was a big hit; everyone loved it. It can grow to be almost as thick as my wrist. Since it was in the petting zoo area, we could touch and play with it. I didn't count, but the zookeeper said it has 700 legs. I even touched a tarantula! Despite its appearance, it's actually very shy and furry. Later on I just happened to witness two raccoons fight over something. This was the most unusual birthday party ever. We cut the cake surrounded by guinea pigs, capybaras, parrots, and various bugs. What a great day!
Great work!
September 9, 2024
1
It was drizzly today, but that didn't ruin Chloe's birthday party plans. We
arrived at the indoor mini zoo around six o'clock. The zookeeper gave us a tour
and taught us about all the animals. The giant millipede was a big hit; everyone
loved it. It can grow to be about as thick as my wrist. Since it was in the
petting zoo area, we could touch and play with it. I didn't count, but the
zookeeper said it has 700 legs. I even touched a tarantula! Despite its
appearance, it's actually very shy and furry. Later, I just happened to witness
two raccoons fight over something. This was the most unusual birthday party
ever. We cut the cake surrounded by guinea pigs, capybaras, parrots, and various
bugs. What a great day!
Sounds amazing!
September 8, 2024
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
The Tim じぁん!!!
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
Learning Language
English
Articles You May Also Like

Same Word, Different Meaning: American, British, and South African English
11 likes · 8 Comments

How to Sound Confident in English (Even When You’re Nervous)
13 likes · 11 Comments

Marketing Vocabulary and Phrases for Business English Learners
10 likes · 4 Comments
More articles