Eline
Professional Teacher
Europe me, mera pasandeeda maussam garmi he kionki uss samay per tum ter sakte ho, nadi or samudr garam he. Khana bhi accha he, lal phal jisse strawberries, raspberries or cherries. Or loag chuttiyon per issiliye ziada shantt he. Akhirme , meri jayanti July me he tho mujhe garmi maussam pasand he. Lekin Bharat me, Rajasthan me, may June or july bahout bahout garmi he, shayed 45degres he. Tho bahar rehna sambhav nahi he. Iss desh me, mera pasandeeda maussam September me kionki paharon hare he or sab ped thunder he.
Nov 10, 2021 4:23 PM
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Writing is good . Some sentences are not understanding Any help sent me message Thanks
Jan 11, 2022 1:08 PM
Rajsthan jitna garm hai utna hi thanda bhi. Samay ke sath wahan garmi aur thandi donon ki ati hoti hai. Waise bharat me aap kabhi bhi aaye desh bhar me ghumate hue aapko saal bhar wo mausham mil jayega jo aapka pasandida hai.
November 11, 2021
Bahut sundar likha hai aapne. Thodi bahut correction ke sath ese perfect banaya ja skta hai.
November 11, 2021