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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I went out all day. I got up at 9am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up cuz it was perfect day for laundry. after that I went to a shopping mall my neighborhood so that I would change the cell phone provider. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. Anyways, It’s been a long day. So I’ll go to the bed earlier than usual. have a good night.
Feb 21, 2021 11:42 AM
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Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I was out all day. I got up at 9am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up because it was the perfect day for laundry. Afterwards I went to the mall in my neighborhood so that I could change cell phone providers. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. Anyways, it’s been a long day so I’ll go to the bed earlier than usual. Have a good night.
Very good! People do say “cuz” for because but it’s more common in texting, not when writing a paragraph. Also a shopping mall is correct but it’s perfectly fine to shorten it to just mall. Hope this helps!
February 21, 2021
Please correct my sentences if you find any mistakes or if they sound unnatural. Today, I was all day. I got up at 9am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up, because it was a perfect day for laundry (try to avoid using the same word twice in a sentence - because it was a perfect day for it - because it was a perfect day for washibg clothes). after that I went to a shopping mall in my neighborhood so that I could change my cell phone provider. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. (You went to bed then got up again?) Anyway, it’s been a long day. So I’ll go to bed earlier than usual. Have a good night.
很好晚安!
February 21, 2021
Today, I went out all day. I got up at 9 am. I did the laundry as soon as I got up because it was a perfect day for laundry. after that, I went to a shopping mall in my neighborhood to change the cell phone provider. I visited my husband’s family on the way back. Then, I got up in the evening. Anyways, It’s been a long day. So I’ll go to bed earlier than usual. have a good night.
February 21, 2021
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February 21, 2021
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