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The Tim じぁん!!!
It's sunny today. I've made up my mind. I'm going to stick my handwritten cinquain on the back of Mom's phone, which inside a transparent case, so she can see it all the time. It might seem a bit boastful, but who cares? People around her hardly read English, good!
Mom
Loving, caring
Baking, cooking, cleaning
Always there to help and guide
Mother
Sep 27, 2024 10:14 AM
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It's sunny today. I've made up my mind. I'm going to stick my handwritten
cinquain on the back of Mom's phone, which is inside a transparent case, so she can
see it all the time. It might seem a bit boastful, but who cares? People around
her can hardly read English, good! Mom Loving, caring Baking, cooking, cleaning
Always there to help and guide Mother
Nice! I checked and cinquains are supposed to be 2, 4, 6, 8, 2 syllables. Yours is 1, 2, 6, 7, 2 but if you are happy with it I guess it’s all that matters!
September 27, 2024
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The Tim じぁん!!!
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese
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English
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