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I have to do my homework,so if you have free time please check my sentences.
Today, I’m going to tell you about my childhood. I was born and raised in Yokohama. When I was born, I was very quiet, so my parents were worried about it because when my old sister was born, she was very noisy to cry. I have one older sister. She is 22 years old now, so she is older than 3 years me. In my childhood, I was always sleeping, so my parents often thinking that I was dead. I always sleep for more than 8 hours, so I like to sleep until now.
When I was a kindergarten student, I stated to learn piano lessons until I was twelve years old. I like to play the piano. I was practicing it twice a week. In my recital, I played the music made by Schubert and Beethoven and so on. When I was seven years old, I started learning to swim. I like to swim. I can swim of butterfly, breaststroke, crawl, and backstroke especially, I was a swimmer of butterfly and backstroke.
When I was a junior high school student, I belong to track and field club. My specially is 200meters and relay runner. I like to run of corner, so I choose 200meters to run. I was in charge of three runner of relay. I like to run, so I often running around the river now.
When I was a high school student, I belonged to Dance club. My specialty is Hip-hop. I participated in the national competition when I was a high school third period student. I was glad because our team’s goal was to participate it. In the culture festival, I danced the music of BTS and Twice and other k-pop music. I like to dance because it’s very healthy for me.
So, that’s it for me. I told you about my childhood and especially club. I hope you enjoy my talk. Thank you!!
Jul 14, 2022 1:02 PM
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I have to do my homework,so if you have free time please check my sentences.
Today, I’m going to tell you about my childhood. I was born and raised in Yokohama. When I was born, I was very quiet, so my parents were worried about it because when my old sister was born, she was very noisy and cried. I have one older sister. She is 22 years old now, so she is older than me by 3 years (or: she is 3 years older than me). In my childhood, I was always sleeping, so my parents often thought that I was dead. I always sleep for more than 8 hours, and I still like to sleep now.
When I was a kindergarten student, I stated to take piano lessons until I was twelve years old. I like to play the piano. I was practicing it twice a week. In my recital, I played the music made by Schubert and Beethoven and so on. When I was seven years old, I started learning to swim. I like to swim. I can swim butterfly, breaststroke, crawl, and especially backstroke. I swam butterfly and backstroke in competitions.
When I was a junior high school student, I belong to the track and field club. My specialty is the 200 meters and relays. I like to run around the corner, so I chose to run the 200 meters. I was in charge of the three runner relay. I like to run, so I often run around the river now.
When I was a high school student, I belonged to Dance club. My specialty is Hip-hop. I participated in the national competition when I was a high school third period student. I was glad because our team’s goal was to participate in it. In the culture festival, I danced the music of BTS and Twice and other k-pop music. I like to dance because it’s very healthy for me.
So, that’s it for me. I told you about my childhood and extracurricular clubs. I hope you enjoyed my talk. Thank you!!
July 14, 2022
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Yui
Language Skills
English, French, Japanese
Learning Language
Japanese
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