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Hi, everyone. I have to give a three minute speech tomorrow,so please see if my statement is correct. Good afternoon. Today, I will talk about my childhood. I was born in Nagano. Nagano is very cold,so we get a lot of snow in winter. My parents worked at ski resort as snowboard instructors. Since, I was on the ski resort all the time and skiing and sledding with my friends. When I was a three years old, I started skiing. Also, My father made a jump board to practice snowborad in the garden. He taught me how to snowboarding. In summer, I played outside with my dog. Her name is Marron. We ran around garden. Also, I made flower crowns for her. Sometimes, I played on stilts and skateboarded with my father. When I was a kindergarten, I liked to playing outside and drawing pictures. My parents were busy with work, so I entered kindergarten eariler than usual. I told my mother "see you later" without crying. Then, I entered elementary school and joined a chorus group. My mother always sang for me when I was a child, so I like singing. I did my best every time, so I participated in chorus contests and got some prizes. This is a good memory. Then, I joined a badminton club. My friend did,too, so I went to my friends house every Wednesday to play badminton. I enjoyed it. Also, I used to play tag and hide-and-seek in the school yard during my lunch break. I was good at running. Especially, I was good at long distance running. I was in the top ten in the marathon every year. However, now it's running slower. After that, I entered a out-of-the prefecture middle and high school. I was worried about all the strangers, but I made some very good friends over the six years. Since, we still see and hang out sometimes. We always had tests and we were very hard. Even during lunch time everyone was studying English vocabulary, but I think it's what keeps me going now. I miss how we all helped each other and worked hard.
Jul 18, 2022 1:39 PM
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Hi, everyone. I have to give a three minute speech tomorrow,so please see if my statement is correct. Good afternoon. Today, I will talk about my childhood. I was born in Nagano. Nagano is very cold,so we get a lot of snow in winter. My parents worked at a ski resort as snowboard instructors. Since, I was at ski resort all the time I enjoyed skiing and sledding with my friends. When I was a three years old, I started skiing. My father made a jump board for me to practice in our garden. He also taught me how to snowboard. In summer, I played outside with my dog. Her name is Marron. We ran around garden and I made flower crowns for her. Sometimes, I played on the stilts and skateboarded with my father. When I was a kindergarten, I liked to play outside and draw pictures. Since my parents were busy with work I entered kindergarten eariler than usual. I told my mother "see you later" without crying. When, I entered elementary school I joined the choir. When I was a child my mother always sang to me so I liked singing. I did my best every time, and participated in choir contests I even won some prizes. This is a good memory. Then, I joined a badminton club with my friends. I went to my friends house every Wednesday to play badminton. I enjoyed it.d During lunch at school I liked to play tag,hide and seek and run. I was good at running. Especially, I was good at long distance running. I was in the top ten in the marathon every year. However, now I don't run as fast as I used to. In middle school and high school I entered an out-of-the prefecture school. I was worried about making new friends, but I made some very good friends over the six years. We still hang out together sometimes. We always tried hard on tests even when the tests were very challenging. During lunch everyone was studying English vocabulary, and I think that is why I keep trying hard to improve my English.I miss how we all helped each other and worked hard.
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July 19, 2022
Hi, everyone. I have to give a three-minute speech tomorrow, so could you please check if my English is correct. Good afternoon. Today, I will talk about my childhood. I was born in Nagano. Nagano is very cold, so we get a lot of snow in winter. My parents worked at a ski resort as snowboard instructors. Since, I lived at a ski resort, I spent all the time skiing and sledding with my friends. I started skiing when I was three years old. My father also made a jump board to practice snowboard in the garden. He taught me how to ride a snowboard. In summer, I played outside with my dog. Her name was Marron. We used to run around our garden and I also made her flower crowns. Sometimes, I played on stilts and went skateboarding with my father. When I was in kindergarten, I liked playing outside and drawing pictures. My parents were busy with work, so I entered kindergarten earlier than usual. I told my mother: "see you later" without crying. Then, I entered elementary school and joined a chorus group. My mother always sang for me when I was a child, so I liked singing. I did my best every time, so I participated in chorus contests and got some prizes. This is a good memory. Then, I joined a badminton club and so did my friend, so I used to go to my friends’ house every Wednesday to play badminton and I enjoyed it. I also used to play tag and hide-and-seek in the school yard during my lunch break. I was good at running, especially long-distance running. Every year, I was in the top ten positions in marathon but now I’m running slower. After that, I entered an out-of-the prefecture middle and high school. I was worried about all the strangers, but I made some very good friends over the six years. Since (then), we still see and hang out sometimes. We always had to sit hard tests and even during lunch time, everyone was studying English vocabulary but I think it's what keeps me going on today. I miss how we all used to help each other out and how hard we used to work.
Good work, don't hesitate to employ "used to" when talking about past habits. All the best to you for your presentation.
July 18, 2022
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