Today is the hottest day in this year. If I go outside, I feel like I will fall down because it is so hot. But everyone who goes to university today is great. I will go too. It is because I am going t

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Today is the hottest day in this year. If I go outside, I feel like I will fall down because it is so hot. But everyone who goes to university today is great. I will go too. It is because I am going to Hyogo for Aimyon’s concert today. So I can do my test without worry. After my fourth class, I will take the Shinkansen. It will be a busy day, but I am very excited and happy.

Jul 14, 2026 3:19 AM

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Today is the hottest day of the year. If I go outside, I feel like I might collapse because it is so hot. However, everyone who goes to university today is amazing. I will go too because I am travelling to Hyogo for Aimyon’s concert today. Therefore, I can take my test without worrying too much. After my fourth class, I will take the Shinkansen. It will be a busy day, but I am very excited and happy.

Level: B2+/C1. Your writing is clear and you express your feelings very naturally. You also use good linking words to connect your ideas. To improve further, focus on using more natural expressions and choosing vocabulary that matches the exact meaning you want to express. Keep up the good work! 😊

Jul 14, 2026 10:12 AM

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