Gabriela
Please correct my mistakes. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’• ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ด์ƒํ–ˆ์–ด์š”. ๋‚˜ ๋จธ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์•„ํŒ ์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์นจ๋Œ€์— ๋จธ๋ฌผ๋ €์–ด์š”. ๋‚˜๋Š” Netflix์„ ๋ดค์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ์ปคํ”ผ๋ฅผ ๋ง›์žˆ๋Š” ๋งˆ์…จ์–ด์š”.
Feb 22, 2021 10:40 PM
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Please correct my mistakes. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’• ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ด์ƒํ–ˆ์–ด์š”. ์ €(It's polite way to say "๋‚˜")๋Š” ๋จธ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์•„ํŒ ์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์นจ๋Œ€์— ์žˆ์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ์ €๋Š” Netflix๋ฅผ ๋ดค์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ๋ง›์žˆ๋Š” ์ปคํ”ผ๋ฅผ ๋งˆ์…จ์–ด์š”.
Hi, Gabriela! I'm so sorry you didn't feel well :( I hope you get better after taking restโ™ฅ
February 23, 2021
Please correct my mistakes. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ’• ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์ด์ƒํ–ˆ์–ด์š”. ๋จธ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ์•„ํŒ ์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์นจ๋Œ€์— ๋จธ๋ฌผ๋ €์–ด์š”. ๋‚˜๋Š” Netflix๋ฅผ ๋ดค์–ด์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ์—ˆ์–ด์š”. ๋ง›์žˆ๋Š” ์ปคํ”ผ๋ฅผ ๋งˆ์…จ์–ด์š”.
์ž˜ ์“ฐ์…จ์–ด์š”! ์งง์•„์„œ ์•„์‰ฝ์ง€๋งŒ์š”. +_+
February 22, 2021
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Gabriela
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