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Composition: A Bad Dream Max found himself standing on a vast plain. Thirsty, he spotted a river nearby and drank some water. Suddenly, he heard a rustling sound. It was emanating from the bushes. To his horror, a giant snake emerged and began to chase him. Max screamed and ran for his life; it was a terrifying ordeal. The snake looked hungry for certain. He ran and ran, his heart pounding in his chest. Eventually, he stumbled upon a large bin and quickly hid inside. The snake, confused by Max's sudden disappearance, couldn't find him. After a while, it gave up and slithered away. Only then did Max dare to breathe quietly and carefully escape from his hiding spot. Abruptly, Max was awake. It had all been a dream. He realized he was perspiring heavily, all because of his nightmare.
Nov 11, 2024 11:27 AM
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Composition: A Bad Dream Max found himself standing on a vast plain. (Being) Thirsty, he spotted a river nearby and drank some water. Suddenly, he heard a rustling sound. It was emanating from the bushes. To his horror, a giant snake emerged and began to chase him. Max screamed and ran for his life; it was a terrifying ordeal. The snake looked hungry for certain. He ran and ran, his heart pounding in his chest. Eventually, he stumbled upon a large bin and quickly hid inside. The snake, confused by Max's sudden disappearance, couldn't find him. After a while, it gave up and slithered away. Only then did Max dare to breathe quietly and carefully escape from his hiding spot. Abruptly, Max was awake. It had all been a dream. He realized he was perspiring heavily, all because of his nightmare.
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November 11, 2024
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