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Yesterday, I had a picnic with my friend in Tokyo.The place was Yoyogi park and it is so big. The nature was so beautiful and nice weather. I made omulet and a lot of onigiri. we ate donuts and it was so delicious. After that, we took a walk around the park. There are many flowers and tree.They are so beautiful. There are very big dog run in the park. Many dogs are running. It was so cute.I love dog so if I had a dog I want to take him this place.I talked about we want to do in winter vacation with my friend. I have a lot of thing to do. For example,take a hot spring in Atami, go to Hokkaido and eat a lot of sea foods and go to a Disney sea and look very big Christmas tree and so on. If I think about many plans, I can’t wait for winter vacation. I really hope it comes soon.
Oct 18, 2025 12:06 AM
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Yesterday, I had a picnic with my friend in Tokyo. We went to Yoyogi park and it was so big. The nature was so beautiful and the weather was nice. I made omulet and a lot of onigiri. we ate donuts and it was so delicious. After that, we took a walk around the park. There were many flowers and trees.They were so beautiful. There were many, very big dogs running in the park. It was so cute.I love dogs so if I had a dog I would take him to this place. My friend and I talked about what we want to do during winter vacation. I have a lot of things I want to do. For example,go to the hot spring in Atami, visit Hokkaido and eat a lot of sea food, go to a Disney sea and look at the very big Christmas tree, and so on. When I think about all my plans, I can’t wait for winter vacation. I really hope it comes soon.
良く書けています✨ 読むのが楽しかったです!楽しい友だちとの代々木公園でのデートみたいで、よかったです🧺 日本には、広い公園が至るところにありますね〜🐕 うちのワンちゃんをそこに連れてきたら、とても喜ぶだと思います。冬休みまで頑張ってくださいね!!❄️⛄️
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Oct 18, 2025 6:03 AM
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