When I was a kid, I always heard the slogan "Faster, Higher, Stronger-Together". All the athletes I saw on TV ran faster on the tracks, the records were broken again and again. It's really excited to

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When I was a kid, I always heard the slogan "Faster, Higher, Stronger-Together". All the athletes I saw on TV ran faster on the tracks, the records were broken again and again. It's really excited to enjoy the fast speeds created by human being. Later, when I grew up a little, a bike was my favorite. I rode it through the streets as fast as I can. At that moments, I really understood the feeling of flying. I even thought that I was the faster person for riding bike in the world until I watched a cycling event on TV. There was a group of people riding a bike in a race. The most astonishing thing was the bikes' speed which even got to over 40 kilometres per hour. The man who wore the yellow jersey was the fastest person for riding bike. From then on, I was deeply addicted to this interesting sport event. Though it looks like a little boring, the patience of the riders really tells me to be patient and clam when I face problems. Nothing can't be overcomed in our life.

Sep 4, 2025 7:51 AM

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When I was a kid, I always heard the slogan “Faster, Higher, Stronger–Together.” All the athletes I saw on TV ran faster on the track, and records were broken again and again. It was really exciting to enjoy the speed created by human beings. When I got a bit older, riding my bike became my favorite activity. I rode it through the streets as fast as I could. In those moments, I truly understood the feeling of flying. I even thought I was the fastest person in the world on a bike—until I watched a cycling event on TV. There was a group of people racing, and the most astonishing thing was their speed: over 40 kilometers per hour. The man wearing the yellow jersey was the fastest rider. From then on, I was deeply interested in this sport. Though it may look a little boring, the patience of the riders has taught me to be patient and calm when I face problems. Nothing in life can’t be overcome.

“It’s really excited” → “It was really exciting” (past tense and correct form). “created by human being” → “created by human beings” (plural). “as fast as I can” → “as fast as I could” (past tense). “At that moments” → “In those moments” (plural). “the faster person for riding bike” → “the fastest person on a bike” (natural). “addicted to this interesting sport event” → “deeply interested in this sport” (smoother and more natural). “clam” → “calm.” “Nothing can’t be overcomed” → “Nothing in life can’t be overcome” (correct form: overcome). Your writing is full of energy and feeling. These small changes just help the grammar and make the sentences flow more naturally.

Sep 5, 2025 1:29 AM

When I was a kid, I always heard the slogan "Faster, Higher, Stronger-Together". All the athletes I watched on TV ran faster on the tracks, the records were broken again and again. It was really exciting to enjoy the fast speeds created by human beings. Later, when I grew up a little, a bike was my favorite. I rode it through the streets as fast as I could. In those moments, I really understood the feeling of flying. I even thought that I was the fastest cyclist in the world until I watched a cycling event on TV. There was a group of people riding in a cycling race. The most astonishing thing was their speed was faster than 40 kilometres per hour. The man who wore the yellow jersey was the fastest . From then on, I was deeply addicted to this interesting sport event. Though it looks l a little boring, the patience of the riders really tells me to be patient and calm when I face problems. Everything can be overcome in our lives.

Sep 4, 2025 12:23 PM

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